My son Isaac helped me come up with this story, and it has really captured my imagination. I wrote it for my nephew's 13th birthday and wanted to get it to him before he graduated high school, so I only got started really. I have a vision of where I want to take it, but for now am curious about initial impressions about the concept in general--especially to boys, ages 10-14 or so. That is probably my target audience. So, if you have one of those kickin' around--can you pass this by them and see what they think and let me know? I'd really appreciate it!
The Dark Diamond, Parts I-III